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PostSubject: Sky City 4!   Mon Mar 10, 2008 3:38 pm

Ok this is Sky City 4!!! The one after Sky City 3!!! LOL.
Ok, enough with the blabbering, here goes:

"Sky City 4"

Chapter 1
What a magnificent explosion. It only happened the other
day. Yet it seemed like such a memory. The Martians did it.
They won the battle. For the people of Earth had arrived
at the Dome at extacly 2:45 am Space Time.
14 year old Lady Lara Had literally cried into 4 buckets of
water, this being said without exaggeration. She had glanced
around the room to see everybody's face, flushed with tears.
They had lost their family in the horrid explosion.
Lara put her head down.
9/11 has nothing on this. She told herself.
There then was a loud scream from 2 yards back.
The space ship wasnt even finished boarding when idiotic electrical fox
Lemony burst out of the crowd, running away from 15 year old Trixie and 8 year old
Olivia, who were chasing him for a reason.
As Lara watched them run by, she collasped to the floor and sobbed like a madwoman.
"Why, why did it had to be Earth that they destroyed? WHY OH WHY? I ASK!"
Lara lashed out at the crowd, grabbing her 10 year old sister Juli .
"Lets go." Lara snapped.

As time passed, Trixie and Olivia were still in pursuit of Lemony.
They had made it to the main building on all of the space dome- the needle building.
Trixie and Olivia chased Lemony all the way up the stairs
of the huge needle building. Lemony screamed, wondering why
the girls didn’t like his obsession of lemons. As they made their
went to the top, Trixie got out a pocket knife. They were planning on killing him, of course.
Lemony was in hot water now. He spoke up.
"Wait! Why don’tyou guys like delicious lemons? They are the best thing in the
whole wide world!"
Obviously not knowing what happened to
the world, Lemony was looking like a real dumbass right about
now. The world blew up. Everybody knew it. It was currently
December and everyone would have to spend their Christmas
and New Year of 2007 in a dome in freaking outer space.
Whoop Dee doop, Happy Happy Joy Joy. Back to the story.

Trixie got angry.
"The world IS FUCKING gone you lemon
sucking retard!" screamed Trixie, stomping her feet.
At that moment, Trixie and Olivia lashed out at Lemony,
having to hear his girlish squeals, they went ahead fiercely striking him
nearly making him die. As they threw him to the ledge, Trixie
stomped on him, squishing his bones and flesh.
"Any last words,you mentally challenged FUCK?" Trixie said, facing him.
"Yeah,Lemons r-rule my life and I'll die a lemon boy!"
lemony said unwittingly, not knowing that his sentence was about to cost
him his life.
"THATS IT!!" Trixie screamed.
In an instant, Trixie and Olivia pushed
Lemony from the ledge of the highest building in the Space Dome
and he dropped 4,000 feet before being chopped to bits by a
helicopter.

Trixie and Olivia watched from 40,000 feet above as the
helipcopter crashed to the ground, its spinners stuck with
Lemony's guts. Trixie felt surprisingly indifferent.
"Good for that damn bastard" She said, walking off.
"Trixie, don't you think we will get in trouble for this??"
Olivia asked her voilent sister, having sense in her mind.
"I dont care, the world blew up and thats all that is on my damn
mind!"
Trixie left down the hundreds of flights of stairs down
the needle buliding, leaving Olivia deserted. Olivia stood there,
looking down at the ground beneath her, 40,000 feet below.
She felt like throwing up.
"HEY WAIT FOR ME!" Olivia yelled,
running after Trixie.

As the two girls walked out of the needle building, they noticed KS, the 14 year old fennec Fox girl. She looked all torn up, as well as everybody else. She was devastated, but this was no surprise to anyone around her. As Trixie looked KS up and down she noticed her bleeding fennec ears and two horrid black eyes.
"Trixie, the damn Pazis took my dignity!" KS told Trixie, shaking her arm.
KS recieved a blow instanty to her head by her "friend" Trixie.
"Kathy what the hell is wrong with your damn ass brain? I thought you toughend
up. I thought you didnt want to talk to me anymore! Take the pain, we are gonna be here
for a while! And once again, I told you, Kathy! The damn Pazis are DEAD! And the damn world BLEW UP! soguess what? I DONT GIVE A SHIT!"
Trixie left Kathy there with her mouth hanging wide open.

Trixie had to make it to the main ship. She was told to meet Lady Lara at the rocket ship terminal. Lara had said that
she would be coming out of the Sky City main rocket ship. It was not until 25 minutes passed that Lara finally came out of the rocketship.
Z-Man and Juli were by her
side, helping her since she was trembling all over. Lara was angry. Trixie had arrived.
Lara saw her and frowned.

"Where is Lemony? i NEED someone to pound their face in!" Lara bellowed out.
"We killed him." Trixie simply replied.
"WHAT?!?" Lara asked shocked.
"Yep, you heard me." Trixe shot back.
"His parents will kill you!"
"You know what? At this point, I dont really care."
Trixie said as she left Lara, standing there in the crowd, followed by Olivia.

By the following day,Christmas eve had come.
Over 5 billion people had a memorial for earth.
7.5 million candles were lit.
Once again, The Martians had suceeded.


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PostSubject: Re: Sky City 4!   Thu Mar 20, 2008 5:56 pm

This is pretty good.
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PostSubject: Re: Sky City 4!   Thu May 22, 2008 9:15 am

Thanks! Here’s some more:

Chapter 2
Next morning had emerged.
Approximately 8:51 AM, Space Time.
Location? The Needle Building.
Christmas day had arrived.
The Joy seemed to have left the spirits of Earth citizens.
Everything was so dull now, so lifeless.
With Earth gone, nobody had a real place to call their home.
Trixie walked around the stairs, looking for someone to talk to.
She could feel the pain and agony welling up inside of her.
If only I could be there in Mars right now, the things I will do to make them suffer…I will do the indescribable….this I promise. As Trixie’s thoughts ran throughout her mind, pain and anger grew in her emotions. Trixie had noticed everything around her was falling apart.
She stared out the 10,000 mile Glass of the dome only to see the debris and rocks flying about space that used to be the home planet Earth. She folded her arms, feeling the cold vacuum of space barely outside the window.

Trixie sighed. She then placed her hands on the glass, feeling that there was a possibility that she would fall into infinite space if she were to be careless. Trixie felt the temperature of the very cold glass spread onto her hands. She shivered.
“Hell is belonging to this god awful place.” She assured herself.
A hand touched her shoulder. Trixie immediately spun around and grabbed the wrists of the very person who performed the action of touching her shoulder. But it was none other than Lara.
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PostSubject: Re: Sky City 4!   Thu May 22, 2008 3:21 pm

Jeepers, mister. Where is the rape scene I wrote?
Btw the next time I speak, it's going to be "jeepers, mister." Even if it's to my mom. XD
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PostSubject: Re: Sky City 4!   Thu May 22, 2008 4:14 pm

Ooh the rape scene is in Sky City 3.
Im a bad person!!!! Crying or Very sad
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PostSubject: Re: Sky City 4!   Thu May 22, 2008 6:59 pm

I said "jeepers, mister" to my mom and she threw a shoe at me. XDD
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PostSubject: Re: Sky City 4!   Fri May 23, 2008 7:32 am

Trixie frowned.
"Oh its you."
Lara approached her.
Lara had tears streaming down her face.
This was no surprise, everybody was feeling all the same.
With a sigh of desperation, Lara hugged Trixie.
This surprised her.
"Wh-what in the hell are you doing?"
Lara didn't let go.
"Trixie, the world is gone, how do you think I feel? All of our memories, they are all gone, ALL OF THEM! And now look where we are....shit, Trixie. Do you know what I would do to KILL these Alien Freaks right now?"
Lara let go of Trixie.
Trixie wasn't surprised by Lara's feelings.
"Join the club, I feel the same way."
Lara watched as Trixie walked away.

9:45.
SpaceShips had been unloading passengers throughout the dome.
In the sky, helipcopters filled the air.
The time the hour of 10:00 came and all of the spaceships had unloaded the passengers by then.
The soldiers marched throughout the streets, intending to protect the dear citizens of Earth.
As SpaceShips turned to set off into space, tears filled the eyes of every living thing that saw the spaceship leave.
The dome departure unit was halfway dilated.
Ships were halfway up the unit as well.
Now they were REALLY slipping away from sight.
Screams were heard throughout the dome as they echoed through the 10,000 mile glass.
As indistinct noises erupted from the crowd of 2.4 billion citizens, the ships made their way into space, leaving the dome for eternity.
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